EDITING - Rough cut target audience feedback

We asked a few members of our target audience to give feedback on our rough cut. We feel this will be very helpful and will make improvement much easier

Some extra comments from our teacher

Positives
-Specific shots create a really suited atmosphere to the song(e.g: bird flying across Thames)
 
-Right amount of lyrical peformance
 
-Strong scenery/wide shots - give viewer a real sense of London
 

Improvements
-Use slow motion instead of fast motion to match track pace
 
-Start with scenery shot instead of artist looking away from camera(swap first two shots around)
 
-Don't cut very often during verses - all about lyrical peformance